Sunday, August 14, 2011
Do you like my book so far?
I like it it's intreaging! but i think you need to explain more about who the caracters are exacly ( the parkingsons?) and what happened to make alyssa and anissa live by themselves in a abandonded house? I also think it might be a good idea to change one of their names! I'm sorry i know it's hard to come up with a name that is just right for your caracter but alyssa and anissa's names are so close that it can be kind of confusing about who's who! Other those that I think your book is really good! I love the story line and your detail in the river! Hope this helps!
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